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Mini Saga #2 - Taking Flight!

December 31st, 2008

Here is my second mini saga.  Hope you enjoy it.

Taking Fight!


Kindergarten is so much fun. Monkey bars delight me. Oh no I’m falling. The pain burns. Where did the pain go? No pain! Why, I’m floating. How strange. I can see myself. Look at the blood. Everyone is standing around looking scared. I’m not scared. Look at me, I’m flying!

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Mini Saga #1 - the Vital Journey

December 31st, 2008

A Mini Saga is a story told in exact 50 words.  Not 49 and not 51 but 50.  I’ve not been a writer most of my life and am now on the journey to eventually write a book or three.  To hone my skills I’m blogging, writing short stories and mini sagas.  I’m posting my first mini-saga here.  This one came easy for me. I suspect that others may not be so easy.

So here goes - let me know what you think.


The Vital Journey


The smell of disinfectant punctured the air he breathed as he lay there, waiting for the masked man, surrounded by shinny clean steel, tubing, buzzers and lights. He wondered without distress, would he live, would he survive? God said, “You’ll be fine, it’s about the kids”. And God was right!

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